Help with this pose - shoulders ?

[night osprey]

I'm struggling witht his pose. slightly turned to side, slighty bent forwards, talking.
I think in the 1st pic her shoulder is too narrow ?
2nd pic the shoulder is wider.
3rd pic shoulder is wider and pushed up for more dynamic.

Does one of these looks better to you then the rest ? More anatomically correct ?

Also - I struggle with the middle line of the shirt.

[torpid valve]

None of these shoulders are wrong, the pelvis is just facing directly at the viewer

You could argue it’s even more parallel than I made it out to be

Here’s a suggestion if you choose to change it

The pose you have in mind isn’t bad, your expression is what’s off

I’m not that fond of female bodies so my red shapes might be a bit off if you wanna add that extra sass by swaying her hip to the side, you seem like you know what to do, good luck 👍

[night osprey]

ooooh ! Thank you !

[night osprey]

thank you so much ❤️

[night osprey]

I just doodled a bit on my phone , think this already looks better 🙂

[torpid valve]

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

You could reasonably end it here now

If you’re satisfied

[night osprey]

Thanks so much you helped me a great deal 🙂

[torpid valve]

No need to thank me I get the pleasure from helping people