#Critique my anatomy?

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uncut stag
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i'm trying to improve my anatomy faster and faster so could anyone provide some feedback on this? (this is one of my artfight attacks)

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warm nymph
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Is it a cartoon style? Because for cartoon style, the anatomy doesn't have to be perfect.
But if you want my opinion,

  1. The shoulder and the hips should be wider.
  2. There should be darker shading in the corner area.
  3. Add a really bright color for lighting
  4. And the hair should be more detail. The shading should be darker, normal and very bring dor the lighting.