#is the hair alright?

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steady adder
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the hair looks wrong to me n idk how to fix it

shut ocean
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maybe keep in mind a bit more the flow of hair, the spike on the black side looks a bit off but otherwise it looks good.

steady adder
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Sorry, I wasn’t clear earlier — I’m not too concerned about the hair flow. It’s the cross-hatching or whatever that is on the black side that feels off to me; it doesn’t quite seem to fit the character. Do you have any tips on how I could fix that?

shut ocean
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ooh i see, well what i personally do when i do cross hatching on paper is following the lines of the hair with said cross hatching. Giving shape to the strands with the hatching itself. So not draw each individual hair but rather coloring in the strands I've defined with cross hatching but i find you drawing looks good like this.

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sorry if its not helpugl i think i would show it better in a drawing xd