kalis art stuff !!!! critiques mostly PLEASE god

[woven sequoia]

hiii!! ok lemme post ts

also is the face okay? i tried to make it look semi realistic

also like PLEASE be horribly mean and awful and harsh w ur critiques cs i need HELP

[potent goblet]

Are you looking for authentic pin up or are you just inspired by the pin up

[woven sequoia]

js inspired by!!!

[potent goblet]

Okay that changes the advice set

Id lower the eyes and the mouth just a tad. Not much but just a lil. With such a wide smile like that, and inspired by the pin up style, id give pronounced dimples or smile ridges.

[woven sequoia]

oh wait this is so good thank u

[potent goblet]

Theres something with the face shape thats irking me but i need to look for a little longer to tell you what

Something like this