The left hand is off but its beutiful
#Eyes (and everything else)
rare bolt
wind goblet
i think the end of the face is too close too rhe mouth. i think the eyes look fine, they look like they’re looking in the same direction. to make them more vibrant you could try adding cyan highlights (or just a greener, brighter color) to make it pop more. i think something about the arms is a bit off (not sure what though, sorry :( )but overall they look fine. i really like your art style, it’s very cute 🫶
keep in mind that i am not a professional at all, you may want,to try a bunch of different things to see what works