Hey! Somethings up w his jaw/neck?

[turbid oracle]

Lowkey like it just somethings off! And its hard to tell when looking at ur own art when i start working on it again ill flip it and maybe just check again

[tropic cosmos]

Y/N

Im not a good artist myself but the shirt kinda looks flat

So like try to start it at like the adams apple

[leaden prawn]

the reason the shirt looks a bit off is because of the shoulders (i think)

[turbid oracle]

Ohhh so you can see his other shoulder is rolled back?

Guys i suck at anatomy

Hold up lemme get my tablet

[leaden prawn]

Me too

btw

The proportions of the face is a bit iff

off*

[tropic cosmos]

Like this 🥲

[turbid oracle]

Let me try fix it brb!

Thank you

[leaden prawn]

np

[tropic cosmos]

Okkk

[leaden prawn]

And also take a screenshot instead of getting another device to take a pic, its alot easier

[tropic cosmos]

If its ibis she can save it 🥲

[turbid oracle]

Yeah i usually take ss just half asleep rn haha

Better?

[leaden prawn]

yes

but, you also have to make the neck a little bit narrower? Idk how to say it

[turbid oracle]

move the back part forward?

[leaden prawn]

let me show you:

the face has a bit of a curve when it comes to draw the eyes

and also, the perspective is a bit confusing. Are you looking at hime forwards, or from the top?

also, you shouldnt make the hair strands the same, because all hair has different widths, lengths, and sizes. And loose strands as well

[turbid oracle]

Okay there i fixed it up a bit. Yeah ty. Uh its just like if u took a 3/4 selfie hes like turning kinda just slightly looking upwards. Also his hair is mostly the same but has different end strans they js are cut off cuz its not big enough