#Just any advice please ✨

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errant stratus
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I love love loved this drawing so much and while I'm still so proud of it I just don't like how the eyes turned out compared to the rest of the drawing. I think the eyes are a little wide maybe?
I know it's not perfect, and I think her expression is a little off?? But if anyone has advice about the eyes mainly so I can know for next time! I don't plan to change this one because I'm scared to ruin it and I still like it but I want to know how to improve. ✨️

vale orbit
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u should try using the rule if thirds and brake down the image and the composition of the image

errant stratus
arctic prairie
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First, I'd like to say it looks great, a lot of people struggle with eyes, but yours are in line and pretty even.

I think it could be the shading that's throwing you off with the eyes, in your reference she has suuuper dark eyeshadow so her eyes look smaller, I have a feeling if you darkened the shadows on the face a bit more it would feel closer to the reference, also she has no highlights in her eye which is so small but can have a huge impact
Hope this helps 😊

errant stratus
near marlin
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I think it was really good but all of the shading needs to be darker! Especially from the right. A light layer from the hair, face, clothes, and gradually get darker and darker. Values are essential for a great drawing

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Also black cat twin 🤩🤞

errant stratus
errant stratus
near marlin
errant stratus
near marlin
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My heart! 💞💕😭😭😭

So excited! 😁