#Anatomy and Composition Critique

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cobalt jay
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Looking for criticism on the things stated in the title, specifically the face on anatomy

languid venture
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hey, ive noticed nobody had replied here yet

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i think the lighting and the pose are really nice, i dont see much wrong with most of the anatomy

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if you want to change anything, you might have to realign her chin slightly, it sits a little far back

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and the hand thats hanging down might be too small. generally hands are as big as the face, chin to hairline

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besides that, personally i wouldnt stick with the square format, you have a beautiful landscape in the background but cutting it off so quickly to the right takes away from it

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i extended it a little here

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ultimately its up to you but i think it d be a good opportunity to play with the stream she s sitting by

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and amp up the feeling of tranqulity