#i just wanna know in which area im lacking the most and where i should concentrate on improving

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golden loom
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poses / composition i already know so thats why i posted only flying heads i wanna know what else needs work

mellow tangle
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Hi i suggest adding a bit more detail here is an example of how I would add more detail while trying to keep ur art style (all i did was add more of a light source )

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It gives it more dimension

golden loom
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ig theres no "too much" harsh lighting prolly

proud fulcrum
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You should work on values and readability
As it was already mentioned your art lacks hard edges
And it isn’t very readable bc of lack of separation between elements and the canvas can be seen through

golden loom
mellow tangle
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There are different kinds of charcoal but I recommend the thin one (idk if it has a specific name english is my second language) also if u wanna preserve the charcoal drawing I recommend buying a spray that just makes it stick to the paper