Whole piece feeling off. What to work on next based on this?

[terse mirage]

face structure is kind of goofy especially with the lack of nose

at first glance, i found it hard to see because of the lack of contrast.

Before anything, I suggest trying to darken or shade areas first to make it easier to see

contrast helps

make the breasts lower

they're not located super high up the torso

but yeah, at least you're aware of what's wrong

i cant draw to fix anything because im not at that level of skill

so from my own knowledge, try making it contrast better

[pure sand]

Stuff on the table and dirty tiles on the floor