#Looking for critique for these comic pages

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red rivet
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It’ll be in a scrolling format, and all but the last is still a wip
Please be harsh, I want this to be really good
feel free to redline if needed <3

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thin grotto
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the inside of the mouth of the fish on the first panel should be more red/pink I think

also the panel where the character is in the desert has a weird hand, it's too puffy

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but goddamn if I ever could critice that rending, it's so good