Overall critique, just to get some other eyes on this drawing and anything I could improve.

[tough dawn]

I just want to see if I’m not seeing something that would make this way better I would just like to hear what other people think directly, also I’m a lil colorblind idk if it effected this myself.

[shrewd needle]

it actually already is really good! can’t get myself to find any flaws

[fresh sleet]

Maybey don't make women so umm .....

You get the gist

[tough dawn]

Honestly I don’t get the gist 😓 I would appreciate some specifics

[tough dawn]

Thank you🎃

[fresh sleet]

Don't make the waist too big otherwise it's oerfect

[shrewd needle]

whats wrong with the waist? it is literally the design of the character

[tough dawn]

It seems a bit bigger than usual because i attempted a very slight perspective admittedly

But it’s naturally on the bigger side that’s just how it is

I can send a reference to her at a more neutral view

I got these doodles

[tough dawn]

I mostly made her waist big (and generally most things big) because it contrasts the other characters around her to make her seem like a leader I guess (not to say that because she’s built like this, she is a leader and those who aren’t are not a but i intend make it so it sets that story at a surface level)

[fresh sleet]

2nd one looks exactley like it should

[shrewd needle]

cool sketches! very dynamic