Just overall critique, what i can improve on or things that are off! ^-^ | ✦ Artists Corner ✦ | Page 1

slim minnow Mar 21, 2025, 1:31 AM

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paper island Mar 21, 2025, 1:33 AM

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Seems good to me, maybe add a little bit of shading in some areas that look dull

slim minnow Mar 21, 2025, 1:33 AM

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oh oki!

vocal mirage Mar 21, 2025, 4:55 PM

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The hands are a bit too small and also (but that can be style) the eyes are in the wrong spot... :)

slim minnow Mar 22, 2025, 4:35 PM

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oo ok!!! could you elaborate on what you mean by the eyes being in tre wrong spot? @vocal mirage?

misty fjord Mar 24, 2025, 9:46 PM

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i think it’s pretty good my only comment is she seems really stiff

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if you’d like u can sorta add motion by moving hair or even ribbons around in whatever direction yk?

#Just overall critique, what i can improve on or things that are off! ^-^