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#Trying to do some lore to a game i wanna make, how is this part?
edgy sonnet
heavy cove
It's a little hard to read and follow. Maybe breaking it up over a couple pages would make it better?
It's clear that you have a lot of lore planned and in your head, but I find that as someone that doesn't know anything, I'm not quite sure what to make of the information you have written. Possibly if you could add some tiny blurbs underneath what you have written to explain it a bit more?
For example "Adult Bayle's soul" and then follow that up with explaining what it is?
Though maybe you want it to be more vague?
edgy sonnet
mb bro,ill try to explain here