Weird eyes?

[fluid lily]

Been working on a drawing of yelena from the marvel thunderbolts trailer and can't work out for the life of me what bugs me about her eyes when I add the white to them 😭

[clear summit]

Eyes aren't naturally white, even tho we may think they are. Try making them light grey, with a shade of a little darker grey on the top part

[fluid lily]

It's hard to see but they are like slight off-white/grey-ish. Maybe not dark enough then? Lol
And I'll try adding some shadow! I do need to actually finish it so maybe it's a trust the process thing

[clear summit]

Yeah maybe. Let me know after

[remote hill]

here is what i noticed and a paint over where i tried to apply my feedback !

i also tried adding simple shading to the eyes since you mentioned you would try that

hope this helps

[fluid lily]

Adding shadow to the eyes helped, and I just played around with the rest of the shading and lighting ✨️✨️

[fluid lily]

I see what you mean! But the head is drawn at a tilt too thats why the eyes are that way ✨️ I agree they might have gotten a little far apart in comparison to my reference so I might try adjusting them

[remote hill]

i suggest adjusting the chin and the neck then! good luck.

[fluid lily]

I appreciate the help! Though I was just focusing on colouring tips rather than proportions and angles rn 🙂

[remote hill]

i see. thats my bad, i thought you were open to any type of feedback since your post didnt specify!

[fluid lily]

No worries at all! ✨️ I know the title isn't specific but I did say above the image that the eyes looked off when I added the white specifically lol
But it's all good

[clear summit]

I like it better that way yeah!

[fluid lily]

The eyes adjusted on both the rendered piece and the flat coloured piece

[merry flower]

It's not bad. Add more rendering and it'll look better