#Anything I should change before I add lineart??

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waxen ferry
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For context this is supposed to be Tone Rion
ANYWAYS
I'm experimenting with a new style and whilst i personally rlly like this sketch im wondering if there's anything i could change or add?
Im just rlly asking for your guys opinions on it ig

plain nymph
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hello first of all i love your style the only thing i see to improve is the arm because from that perspective it would look different!

brisk fossil
# waxen ferry For context this is supposed to be Tone Rion ANYWAYS I'm experimenting with a n...

Let’s see…

Like mentioned before, the right arm looks wonky with the perspective you drew her in. Foreshortening can be tricky, so I recommend imitating how the arm would look in that perspective. Her upper arm would “extend” towards the camera while her lower arm and hand would be bigger.

On the same topic, there are a few things that aren’t so glaring, but there’s something i wanna ask before i point them out.

Is she sitting down and we are looking down at her, or is she standing leaning her body towards the camera?

waxen ferry
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She's standing but the camera is above her, i can see if i can pull up the original reference image i used