I finished this art piece a bit ago and I was looking if there is potentially anything I could improve on.
#Critique
plain loom
uneven elm
Its very simple and when you're drawing this way its important that the lines dont go into each other(one of them is red and one green) (look 1st pic). It will look better if you change its placement a bit to some side. There are some small mistakes that I marked with a circle. Your hair shading doesn't match how the face is shaded, you can try sth like this (look pic 2)
