can someone critique this? what can i improve next time

[balmy saffron]

Ideally you could study a bit more anatomy

The hands are bit misproportionage to the body

The sholders ideally should be around the same length away from the neck

The right arm (his right) is bending a bit oddly?

The ankles should ideally be about the same length all throughout and not grow as they go lower , in fact they do get bit smaller as you go lower

Along with those i also reccomend studying clothing folds

I’d personally use a refrence as to see how the clothes bend and to spot mistakes in anatomy , drawing from refrence is always great !

Besides that the drawing is super cool it could just use few adjustments here and there!