#critique for a wip comic panel

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proud lake
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I’m struggling to draw the hand slamming down onto the alarm, reference photo provided

proud lake
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my attempt

proud lake
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critique for a wip comic panel

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any critique here?

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(not quite done yet)

proud lake
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any critique? (update)

proud lake
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any critique?

proud lake
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Any critique?