#Any criticism ? Is the respective on the hands off ? and does he read as a ghost ? He's a ghost
hidden flame
dark pilot
dude
thats fire!
if you could just do hard outline, it would pop a bit more
maybe ballpoint pen if you can
wintry scaffold
Upper arms seem to be different sizes/locations but other than that this looks amazing. Ghost designs aren't typically very textured but I think this is an interesting take. If you're looking for a more traditional look without changing the design too much, an aura around him or fading out the ends of the tail and/or tongue should work. Still, this is great the way it is
regal pilot
Maybe the right arm should slightly be bigger