comm sheet help!

[keen goblet]

I was hoping to have some insight on what I could improve in my commission sheet.
I included 2 images. the second having a portion removed from it to see if it makes it look too cluttered.

a. Design

1. Does it look cluttered?
2. should I keep the payment tab (the first image)
3. Do some aspects of the design feel childish or unprofessional?
4. if you saw it in a sea of many other artists commission sheets does this stand out?

b. content

1. Does it have all the info a buyer is looking for?
2. are the prices reasonable

Please feel free to critique anything else and feel free to be blunt with your responses. Thank you for reading all this. Have an awesome day :DD

[high birch]

I think depending on the quality and details you added, the price is ok

Maybe slightly expensive

Regarding the commission sheet I think it's really creative and interactive it looks great imo

And yes you should keep the payment tab maybe move it more to the left

[keen goblet]

is it really??? im so confused cuz Ive had so many mixed responses and Im afraid if I might have overcharged my clients 😭

what price would be more fitting?

[keen goblet]

ohhh I could give it a try! thank you :DD. Ill try to give an update on how it looks when I make the change

[high birch]

you could also try designing the lines that seperate the body parts

just an idea

[keen goblet]

I wanted to keep it simple so it doesnt distract too much from the drawing yk. Maybe its too simple 😅? Id love to hear what you had in mind :0

[high birch]

if I were to buy the whole art I would go for 45$ it also depends on how much time you've spent on it. I'm not really an expert at this yet but 60$ for a character seems a bit much to me you'll have to ask different people how much they would pay for it to actually come up with a reasonable price

[high birch]

i wouldn't say its crowded at all the design looks really eye catchy if yk what i mean

[keen goblet]

Ive been trying to request feedback on it across a couple of servers and the prices I got including the one you suggested range from 45$ - 130$
but the gap feels too massive for me to properly settle on a price from that 😭

[keen goblet]

aaahh thank you! that was one of my main concerns but maybe Ive been looking at it for too long ;_;

[high birch]

if that's so then I think u should choose between 45-60$

[keen goblet]

yep that sounds fair. Imma just wait a little for some more feedback