Someone told me the faces look too flat. How to improve ? | ✦ Artists Corner ✦ | Page 1

keen lily Oct 6, 2024, 1:19 PM

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If you have any ideas, please tell or feel free to redline.

I'm also not happy with the rendering of the guys hair yet, definately needs some more work.

keen lily Oct 6, 2024, 2:53 PM

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i tried to enhance the shadows and reworked his hair. I think it looks finished now ?_?
(also i colored the lineart)

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idk his hair still looks like plastic. halp

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ok i THINK i did it

glass night Oct 6, 2024, 4:21 PM

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Can I just question where the light source is coming from?

glass night Oct 6, 2024, 4:39 PM

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I’m just struggling to see a clear light source and the highlights r confusing me

glass night Oct 6, 2024, 5:03 PM

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Me personally I wldnt hv the highlights to much like lines

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And I wld hv it more blocky

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But idk

keen lily Oct 6, 2024, 7:04 PM

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thank you : )

waxen rampart Oct 7, 2024, 10:51 PM

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i think you should change the colour of the lineart? the black really takes away from the beautiful rendering

#Someone told me the faces look too flat. How to improve ?