#I'd like to be criticized

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surreal gate
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I would like to get acquainted with the criticism (anatomy, lighting, etc.) I will be very grateful!

final thorn
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Hmnn this is very pretty!!! The anatomy of the hands is a little questionable though. The part of the hand that the thumb is coming out of is really elongated. I don't know if you used a reference but you should try to study hands a little! Other than that, the contrast of the lighting could be pushed more (darker shadows, brighter lights). But that's about all the critique I have rn!! Again this is a very nice piece I really like how you did the face..

small dagger
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How many joints does the left hand thumb have? I see 3 bumps before the chick. Also the left hand back have unnecessary bumps.

The thumb have 2 joints and so i think you should remove the middle bump. And the right hand, just flatten it