#Criticism

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inland copper
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How could I make this drawing better? I'm not really good with perspective so some feedback and tips on how to get better are very welcome. Also what kind of lighting should I do? First pic is line art only and second is an idea I had for said lighting

sand jacinth
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honestly, idk what there is to criticise, i would just suggest that you add a bit of colour, it adds more to the drawing.

finite yew
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It feels like it's missing some depth or proper overlap in the drawing, that's my simple criticism.

inland copper
finite yew
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Tried to make a correction drawing on it, while just eyeballing the perspective (no ruler and no perspective grid), and got tired and gave up on the right side.
Sooo... All I gotta say is if you draw a lot of shapes that look 3d your perspective drawings will improve over time naturally hmm

I'm not gonna lie I suck at explaining stuff

bright cosmos
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Omggg your art is so detailed. Try to colour it

inland copper
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Here's my reference for the background

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I get what you saying though I'll try to study shapes a bit more