#Is this ok? Can it be improved? Am I missing something?

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normal nimbus
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Hi : ) So... does this look like something or is it lacking? I guess the perspective of the sword is not quite right but I cant wrap my head around it - should I just make it broader at the bottom, would that do the trick with illusion of depth ?
Othen then that - any major issues that need fixing ?

:3

blazing vault
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That is such a cool drawing! I think maybe the sword should be more tilted. The rock big rock isn't straight but going inwards to the bottom, so the sword shouldn't be straight. So maybe tilt the sword to the side than make it so the sword is tilting to the back if that makes sense

normal nimbus
blazing vault
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Ooo yeah👍