Anything i should chnage or add?

[tawny crane]

it looks a bit off idk. I also need help deciding the hair and face

[hallow cloak]

I'd advise to shorten the neck. when starting out we tend to over exaggerate certain features that are really shorter than we think

The neck is less like a funnel and more like this (gimme a sec)

There are muscles around the neck causing it to be shorter from the main torso