Need help with front profile

[fierce prawn]

I think it turned out pretty good but the face shape feels kinda "black?„
If you have any tricks or tips please message me. Thanks.
(Also the moustache feels kinda off compared to the side profile)

[fierce prawn]

Need help with front profile

[static pagoda]

It's because The space between his beard and his mouth looks like his mouth. like the mouth looks big because you didn't paint it this is why he looks black 😭😭

And make his eyes a little bit small