Something feels off

[fringe frigate]

I don't know how to feel about this pose so I had blocked it in with color to get a better sense, but still...something feels off. Maybe the way the clothing will fall or something else. Any advice?

[near frigate]

I believe u should trust the process of the lineart, bc to me what u did on the sketch looks great!

I can't see smthn wrong with ur drawing actually, looks amazing🥳 but I understand u blocked it with the colours. I think u should continue lineart-ing the sketch then colour it, in my opinion I think ur drawing's astounding! for the clothes, try drawing it the same way the body's facing (this is a recommendation, don't needa take it if u want)

[wintry valve]

maybe you should use the original lineart, and color that one

messy lineart can make drawings look better

[stoic nexus]

not really advice but I absolutely love this piece so much!!! The pose seems so flowy and it works so nicely in my opinion :D Would you be okay with me using this pose as inspiration for a drawing of my own? :D

[fringe frigate]

Im using the original one still, like I said, I had only blocked out the entire pose in order to better visualize the finished pose

[fringe frigate]

It would be fine, I don't own the pose after all lmao

[fringe frigate]

sounds all good, I just get paranoid the more I look at a drawing sometimes if something is off lmao