find errors in face angle

[violet fiber]

Let me know what improvements can be done i did a lineart so I can make adjustments .. please critic. 🙂

[fossil flare]

Hello! The face frame is solid and the eyes are so pretty! I think it would be nice to adjust the length of the brow, and ever so slightly tilt the mouth clockwise. Here is a guide that might help. Let me know if you have any questions :)!

[violet fiber]

Thank you so much for your guidance. I'll work on it. Thank you so much. 💕❤️

[fossil flare]

No problem!! Good luck ^ㅂ^!

[violet fiber]

I'll send you once I made those adjustments

[fossil flare]

I'll def look forward to it!

[violet fiber]

Hi I made some adjustments but I can't figure out about mouth im a bit confused

[fossil flare]

For the mouth, if you draw a vertical curved guideline following the nose, you can see that the mouth is very very slightly to the right.

As for the lip shape, you can look at some references, but here's a drawing of a typical lip in that perspective.

[violet fiber]

I get it now thanks alot

I just have to make lips in proportions according to nose

[fossil flare]

Yes, you got it! No problem and good luck :)!

[violet fiber]

Hey I have tried another sketch using reference I hope it worked well.

If you find any errors let me know. I'm just learning new face angles you know xD

[fossil flare]

Ohhhh the eyes, eyebrows, nose and mouth all are looking great, good job!!

[rare storm]

Thank you so much you know your advice really helped me alot. Thank you for that.

[fossil flare]

It's no problem, I'm rly glad it helped ^-^!

[rare storm]

Hey I need a little help can we discuss in dm if you don't mind?

[fossil flare]

Of course! I have a dentist's appointment soon, so I'll message you when I come back!