#Feedback with lineart

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dreamy sparrow
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I'm looking for anyone's thoughts on this lineart until now and for any tips on how i could make it more apealing :3
Any other feedback is welcome as well!

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hard ingot
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Oo i like! I just think that the mouth isn’t in the right perspective. The face is turning away, but the mouth looks like it’s facing forwards