need some critique!

[ocean tinsel]

this sketch feels kinda off but i cant tell why. Is there something I can do to improve this drawing?

[cerulean igloo]

First off, great work! I love the face. I just changed a few things to improve the pose. I think the head could be slightly smaller, and the length of the neck longer to make it more in proportion with the body. As you can see, I turned the chest more inward so that it could match the bust. However, if you want to keep chest outwards, I’d maybe just move the bust outwards as well to make it in proportion with each other. As for the arm, I’m not quite sure what’s going on with the right arm, however, I think to just improve the anatomy, add more curvature. As for hands, haha, I’m not well versed in them so that’s about all the advice I can give. Remember to take my critique with a grain of salt, I am, by no means an expert at anatomy or anything. But i hope these adjustments can help improve the final piece.

[velvet sequoia]

It's amazing!! Just the body is not accurate, but overall, this is scrumptious!!

[ocean tinsel]

thank you so much i tried out some of your ideas and it looks much better now! i'll still add some changes but thats how it looks rn with a few fixes

[plain drift]

i think the head is to huge for the body

[ocean tinsel]

thanks for telling. i made it a bit smaller now but it's still looks a little weird

[cerulean igloo]

Agreed! Much better, and I really like the placement of the right arm now, looks a lot cleaner ahhh can't wait till you finish!

[ocean tinsel]

thank you i'll post the result once it's finished!

[plain drift]

that's because the torso is all weird

And you lack the understanding of proportion and stuff

Like practice body pillow method. where you sketch the torso twisting and bending in different postiion

[ocean tinsel]

I get it now! I've already practiced a little with body pillow method and i can already tell what i did wrong tysm!

[plain drift]

i drew some guide line for the breast and stuff