hihi! pls give tips

[tender solstice]

any critique is appreciated guys!! dont hold back haha

[sonic cloak]

It's a nice start, try being more confident with your lines

[versed scaffold]

I think it looks very cool! It just needs some of the lines to be erased

[unreal hinge]

Lines are a bit messy, but I also think you should split the hair into clumps like this: (also the pic was rushed)

[lofty sphinx]

it looks much betterr needs more cleaning on the lines