#Need help with value and anatomy

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tough junco
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the face looks off but idk how to fix it and i want to be sure the values are fine before i get to color this drawing. also it's my first time drawing with grayscale. tips and critique are welcome 🙂

rancid mauve
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Something big is that the arm feels not very proportional to the rest of the drawing. The finger details (sorry that sounds gross) look very nice individually but the elbow is missing form and the hand feels out of place. The hair and face are kind of differently angled too! Let the hair flow with her head. The shadow falling on her hair near her eye looks super nice, I think your art would benefit from more of that! I really love the hair details especially on the left side. It looks so nice and flowy!

Overall, just focus more on what things look like in relation to each other! Next time you study something, look at the distance between notable features in addition to those features. I really love your style. It’s so soft and the face looks super gorgeous.

tough junco