#Any suggestions on how I can make this more dynamic?

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rose linden
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I finished a lineart for this piece but I still feel like there's something off. I have a feeling it has to do with the general anatomy though.

wide verge
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maybe use fish eye to make the perspctive look cleaner

midnight verge
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The perspective definitely adds some dynamic-ness to it. I do thing it's moreso the tightness of the pose. Try to loosen it a little bit, add a bend to the arm on the left and a bit more roundness to the one on the right :))

rose linden