looking for feedback

[grand tide]

I’ve started drawing online as of today, trying to create an original stand based of jojos bizarre adventure, naming it “sweet disaster” I’m having trouble with the cloak, I’m working on my phone so I don’t have many tools

[crimson topaz]

Looks great!

[grand tide]

thanks, doi you have any feedbakc maybe on how i can make the cloak look better?

[crimson topaz]

Uh, do you mind if i draw over it to shoe you what id do?

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[grand tide]

yea, feel free

[crimson topaz]

Id add a line right there to make it look more realistic

[grand tide]

thanks, is there anything else i should do?

[crimson topaz]

Nah, the rest looks great!

[grand tide]

thanks