looking for critique and tips

[mild tinsel]

Sorry my crappy camera doesn't do it justice

[weak storm]

Can't say much about the anatomy, since I'm pretty much a beginner myself. The fist does seem kind of big though, almost as big as the guy's head.

And I can see what you were trying to do with the clothing creases, but to me they seem kind of... aggressive? Like they're very visible and they stick out a lot. I don't know, maybe it's just me.

But overall I think it looks very cool!

[mild tinsel]

Thanks I will fix that for my next drawing