maybe the nose is too prominent and the shape is too caucasian, most korean noses are softer and don't have those sharp edges or characteristics, and are also a bit smaller even if you look for a androgynous look.
Also the cheekbones must be softer and get diffuse with the eye part
Asian people have a really thick skin because they live in a really volcanic and high altitude places so their features are softer and thick, just like the eyelids should be.
if you want it to look more feminine try to make the chin softer so it compensates the masculine features with the feminine ones.
#Looking for advise and critics
amber ravine
lastly try to not use pure white or pure black into drawings it breaks the illumination. If you wanna darken that part of the face you also have to do it in the rest of the figure so it doesn't look flat or not finished, and finally add in the shadow part a bounce light so it gives more depth to the drawing
but your style it's pretty cool and I love the drawing surely it will end up fantastic
(and give it more eyelashes so it looks more feminine)
silver cloak
lastly try to not use pure white or pure black into drawings it breaks the illum...
ik, i just started it in black-white, i understand that way colors and structure more! Gonna do colors later as i fix the face
Thank you dearly for your advise and response, you made my day❤️