#help with font ;[

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desert shoal
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The art looks GREAT. I think the font looks weird because the text barely fits in the space you left for it. Because it is so close to everything it looks like an after thought. So a font with less spacing between the letters might work better? Or just simply making it smaller? Adding text to an image is always trail and error for me elgato

karmic forge
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Theres a bit of a tangent with the exclamation mark just almost touching the tiger's bum. I feel like you could try making the text larger, to cover some part of the art and adding a white outline (only in the area that touches the art) to separate it. But this is just an idea, u don't have to cover it if it's important to you ofc

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I'd also try for a font that's less.. wide? But still thick. If that makes sense

pastel agate
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The art is beautiful! The geometric and line-less style feels very vintage (around the 1950s perhaps) ^^ A small suggestion for the art would be adding some halftone effects, noise, and color bleeding if you're willing to lean into that look!

As for the fonts, I included some fonts (with their names) that may help, along with some inspiration!

jolly wind
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Okayy thank you so much for the amazing and detailed critique guys! I'm going to try to revise it :D