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sonic veldt Jul 8, 2024, 7:02 PM

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So I got a new tablet for drawing and I wanted to know if the sketch and/or the line art can be improved upon. Personally, I'm a fan of the sketching but not so much about the line art.

burnt ivy Jul 9, 2024, 12:14 AM

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Why the waist smaller then the chest?

sonic veldt Jul 9, 2024, 1:05 AM

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Yeah, I didn't really think this was a problem when I did the sketching. I guess that's why the line art looks as bad as it is. Do you have any more tips on improving these?

sonic veldt Jul 9, 2024, 3:15 AM

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Update: So I fixed the waist proportions a bit as well as redoing the line art:

burnt ivy Jul 9, 2024, 7:47 AM

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I see no waist now. you should learn the fundamentals like shapes and anatomy so on

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