i need ideas for a comic

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The only critique i would have is that this is cute, but the static pose of the characters leave something to be desired.

Try to really push that body expression, have them really emphasis with their whole being what theyres feeling

heres some examples i doodled up.

Also changing the panels to different colours could be nice,

the hair ahoges could be used as symbols and perhaps you should get into using japanese expression indicagtors to give interest.