im sorry for sendign this AGAIN
#anything to make the pose more dynamic???
deft chasm
deep kettle
the easiest you could do is just manipulate the hair and the clothes flow to imply movement
faint dock
Ok so, the easiest thing you can do to make it easier for yourself is make the lines clear and clean! Erasing lines that are behind other things will help make the drawing feel more 3D, which is a big part of making a dynamic drawing.
I drew a few easy changes to the pose as well,
- Pull the bent knee even further up to exaggerate the pose. Right now the silhouette is a bit ambiguous because the two legs are making a not-very-recognizable shape, but bending the leg a bit more solves that!
- The gun looks relatively heavy, but in your drawing the character is holding it very far out from their body, which would be difficult to do with a long heavy object. By placing the gun higher up and closer to the character’s centre of balance, the pose becomes more balanced and believable! This also gives you the chance to show the characters elbows, which is great because it gives us more information about how the character is posed.
- Finally, I moved the bulk of the hair to the other side. You can still draw it however you like, but when it comes to dynamic poses, it is usually helpful to make one side of the shape simple, and the other side complex. And in this case, I think the hair adds more to the drawing when it’s on the right side!
I love the concept and I think you did a really good job choosing a pose, since it is already fairly dynamic, these suggestions just help bring it the extra mile
also I love the gun, its got a very good weight to it
deft chasm
thank you so much!!! i couldnt see since i was at school, but ill keep these in mind!!