Just finished the lineart for this piece and would like some feedback before colouring

[odd mica]

Not an artist so not much I can help with in terms of advice or suggestions, but it is incredibly cute and wholesome! I like it! :)

[steep coral]

Hmmm not sure if youre looking for feedback on lineart or just in general, but if its in general then klee's head is way too small imo, like the top part is too short. And her face is also too short n round. Like its unnaturally round like a circle imo

If u mean lineart then def you could try to use thicker lines to seperate kaeya and klee, esp bc both characters have very detailed clothing, esp near klees legs, its hard to clearly see kaeyas arms since a lot of detail.