I need criticisms, and suggestions for how to make this sound better please.

[neat cloak]

I am composing a song for someone special to me and I would like some tips or criticisms if possible

As you can probably tell I'm still experimenting with the rhythm/riff

I'm trying to make it a warm, fuzzy song

I want to eventually add on a drums and bass track myself but I'm bad combining two tracks

I've had a few friends tell me it sounds good but a few others thought it didnt really have the personal feel I'm going for

[misty quarry]

what‘s the chord progression?

[neat cloak]

I'm unsure which chords, I'm about to head to work otherwise I would map it out. I do know the notes though

It's a slide from 9 on the a string to 11 and I also hit the e string open

Then I go back to 9 and 7

Repeat it

Than hit 11 and then 9 on the d string

Etc

I think f# into g#? Possibly

[misty quarry]

i just played it on my guitar, it has nothing with sharps and flats

try sticking to smaller note jumps

and try to add some variation to the chords

everything else is good i think

[neat cloak]

Will do, I should have time next weekend when I'm off work to mess on it some more,

[neat cloak]

Yes my plan is to fill it out but I'm a beginner with composing so I'm experimenting a lot

Does it have the warm/fuzzy effect? With the notes I chose?

[misty quarry]

The effect comes from the choice of dynamics, instruments and tempo

Yeah the effect is there

[neat cloak]

Ok that's good, it's what I'm looking for

Also do you have any tips for adding in a bass line and or some acoustic guitar? I can make a bass line and a acoustic part I'm just bad at playing it together at the same tempo