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mortal gazelle
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zenith egret
You cannot see the pose clearly, the anatomy is incorrect, the way the left leg is stretched does not look good, I do not know what is under the feet, the perspective of the shoulders is poorly proportioned and the arms are very bad, it seems as if they are broken, it seems as if your idea is not clear since one of the hands is on the opposite side, there is a lot to improve but I will only talk about the anatomy
stiff flame
Hey hon!! I thought i’d do some drawovers with construction lines to help with the legs, just because I also struggled with legs so so much when i first started off!! First I drew over your original drawing’s anatomy to better understand what pose you wanted to go for, like so (1st image) when I do that you can better see that the pose for the legs is a little off, and the crotch comes down a bit too far. I did another drawover where I fixed those things with more construction lines (2nd image) and i added more of a line of action too to go with the awesome composition you’ve got going on with the sword!! I moved around your original then to be a little more anatomically correct so you can see what it’d look like without the red lines and in your style
P.s. something that helped me out so much with the legs was drawing the hips with the little indents for the legs like you can see in the drawovers above, and imagining the thighs and calves as little cylinders instead of complicated groups of muscles. That helps with foreshortening and posing heaps too!! I hope I helped, if you keep at it i’m sure you’ll be amazing! Your line quality is already super pretty!! :)
robust hare
id say dry using colors (if wanted) and try working on arm muscles abit to make them more thicker other wise amazing work 💕💕
mortal gazelle
id say dry using colors (if wanted) and try working on arm muscles abit to make ...
its manga style soo