#need some crit

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glass fog
round stirrup
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Hello! I love the look of the start of this piece, and your blending is super nice. I find though that your values are very similar, which when paired with the nice blending leaves the form a little undefined. I definatly think you should keep your blending but I would darken up your shadows a bit

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I can also see the light source you are going for (and if you want to keep it soft that is perfectly fine) but one thing that can create a lot of visual interest in any piece is a variation in shadow types

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Right now all your lighting is super smooth and there can be some fun shapes made if you add some more cast shadows!

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Here is a graphic I made for another critique earlier, hopefully this outlines what I mean by using different shadow types

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If this still doesn’t make sense (and of course if I have your consent) I could also draw out what I mean on your piece (only if you are comfortable with that)