limber pelican
I’ve been having some beef with this drawing for a while. Although I think I’ve fixed it mostly I still think some things look off and I can’t pin point it. I’m having issues with the way the guy looks he just looks like he doesn’t fit it with the rest of the piece. Also the girls face looks off but I don’t know how. Any help would be much appreciated!!!!
odd pike
I’ve been having some beef with this drawing for a while. Although I think I’ve ...
Helloooo! I was whisking by the critique channel and noticed this cute little dude in the photo ^^ I figured id drop the quick suggestion to add a tilt to his head! (I assume he’s male anyway. I apologize if I’m wrong!) Its rare, unless purposeful, that side-profiles are straight! Additionally, your eye pupil’s direction was off. In a side profile eye, the pupil is more on the back wall of the iris! Also, the arch of the eye needs to follow a more dramatic line! Lastly, for how I perceived him to be pivoted, the shoulder looked a little too low/long.
In my example, I may not have conveyed the correct/desired shape of your character’s face, for that I apologize, but hopefully I got the point across. Maybe I was able to help!
