Commission Sheet Help?

[wide nymph]

Any feedback is soooo appreciated!! Is it appealing? Easy to understand? Anything I can do to improve it?

[south raptor]

I love the build of it :]] the only thing i would add is shading/rendering somewhere or say if youre not doing that, otherwise it looks awesome :]
Also i love your poses, they look so motiony idk

[wide nymph]

Thank you so so much!! I totally didn’t think to add that!! That’s the sweetest compliment I’ve ever gotten on my sketches. Tysm :,3 I’ll definitely add the fully rendered bit to it :D

[south raptor]

Awesome :]] good luck getting comms :]