#Character Design help

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noble hedge
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This character is a fire breather in a circus and does other acts involving acrobatics.
Personality is still a work in progress but overall she’s got a temper…

Any tips on how I can improve these wip’s and her character design?

I’m also working on color theory right now so any tips on that would be awesome

All help is appreciated and I prefer constructive criticism please <3

rustic umbra
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ooow i really love the concept! There's not much I can comment on because I'm also learning color theory, but one thing I could say is that you should take a look at the hand that holds the cane, which should be a little bigger. On the other hand, I think that It would be interesting to put a choker on it (I'm not saying a collar because when you're doing acrobatics and so on, it's not a good idea to have things hanging to avoid any accidents, so I think you'd have to be careful with the slats on the sides. I like and I highlight how tight are the clothes because of what I mentioned recently, that talking about acrobatics you need tight clothing to avoid any accident and have more comfort with so much mobility that the activity itself requires.