First time with coloured pencils, harsh crit pleaae

[simple saddle]

the placement of the facial features is off
but in terms of actual color pencil technique - very nice, but also very timid
good color choices, nice layering, but under-developed values
if you want to eventually master color pencil, be prepared to spend a lot of time learning to meticulously layer, deepening the range of your values and giving colors more nuance

BMD portraits is a great youtube channel to find out more about color pencil; he does realistic color pencil portraits with a lot of footage of the process along with explanations