any critiques?

[grave gust]

This is very good. She seems to have cameras in her eyes. Full Bio Api

Black helicopters in her bloodstream

[hexed badger]

🤣

[tribal agate]

I would just add some more detail to the hair and try to make sure the skin stays inside the lines and there's no spillover. You need some more manual definition there, don't just use a hair brush. Also, I would blend the shadows on the whites of the eyes some

[hexed badger]

This better?

I added more of the blue bounce light of imaginary water